Sample Answer 1: Band 8
Language translation software programs have gained popularity in recent times due to
developments in the science and technology sector. Due to this development, web-based
language translation applications have grown in the past few years. But learning a language
from a human instructor can be far beneficial. I agree with the statement that there are
manifold benefits in learning a language. In the subsequent paragraphs, I shall explain why
learning a language from a human instructor is beneficial.
Language translation apps are becoming increasingly famous nowadays because they are free
and easily accessible. But there are a variety of reasons why learning a language is
essential. Primarily, learning a language has innumerous benefits. People who speak more than
one language have improved memory, problem-solving and critical thinking skills and acquire
the ability to multitask. Also, there are still certain parts of the world where internet facilities
are not available. Softwares for translation are not available in such places. Learning a new
language becomes necessary in these scenarios.
Secondly, the translations provided by these web-based translators are word-to-word
translations. It merely gives the meaning of the word and fails to provide the true essence of
the sentence. Translations apps are built in such a way that they cannot understand the slang
and idioms used by people in everyday life. In contrast, an instructor can help you understand
the true significance of a sentence. Sometimes there are multiple meanings to one word, and
translation apps fail to convey its exact meaning. As a result, it can cause a lot of confusion and
misunderstanding.
Even though web-based translation software’s are readily available and pocket friendly, they fail
to provide the true meaning of the sentences.
To sum up, translation tools are not reliable. It fails to provide the sentences’ accurate meaning,
and one should not rely on language translation apps just because they are readily available.
Structure of the essay
You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So,
• Do you agree that even though there are a lot of language translation softwares
available, learning a language still could be advantageous?
(or)
• Do you disagree that even though there are a lot of language translation softwares
available, learning a language still could be advantageous?
Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it.
Don’t forget to state your opinion on it.
Question Paraphrased – Language translation software programs have gained popularity in
recent times due to developments in the science and technology sector. However, there are
many translation apps available on mobile phones and laptops. But learning a language from an
instructor can be far beneficial.
Opinion – I agree with the statement that there are manifold benefits in learning a language.
A thesis statement – In the subsequent paragraphs, I shall explain why learning a language
through a human instructor is beneficial.
Body Paragraph 1:
Topic: Why web-based translators are unreliable
Supporting points:
• Knowledge acquisition is necessary
• Internet unavailable in certain parts of the world
Body Paragraph 2:
Topic: Why learning a language is necessary
Supporting points:
• Translator apps are unreliable
• Fails to provide the true meaning of the sentences
• Human instructors are reliable
Conclusion:
Reiterated that translation software applications are unreliable and acquiring new language
skills is necessary.
