IELTS Advantages and Disadvantages Essays

  • How to Plan & Write IELTS Double Question Essays

    IELTS double question essays are also known as ‘direct question’ or ‘two questions’ essays. They are distinguished by two characteristics:

      • They have one statement with two different questions after it.
      • The questions may or may not be linked.

    Here are 3 examples:

    1) Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted.

    How can we conserve these resources?

    What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

     

    2) Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want.

    Is this a good way to raise children?

    What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

     

    3) The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society.

    Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles?

    Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?

    In this lesson, I’m going to demonstrate step-by-step how to plan and write IELTS double question essays.

    Here’s what we’ll be covering:

    Click the links to see lessons on each of these Task 2 essay writing topics.

    Once you understand the process, practice on past questions. Take your time at first and gradually speed up until you can plan and write an essay of at least 250 words in the 40 minutes allowed in the exam.


    3 Common Mistakes

    These three errors are common in IELTS double question essays.

      • Not answering both questions fully.
      • Not outlining both answers in the introduction.
      • Mistaking it for one of the other essay types.

    Many students make the mistake of only answering one of the questions, or focusing more on one question than the other which leads to an unbalanced essay. Both these errors will seriously affect your score for task achievement.

    You must outline everything you are going to write about in the introduction. This is your blueprint for the whole essay. I’ll show you how to do this and get your essay off to a great start.

    It’s easy to mistake IELTS double question essays for one of the other four types of Task 2 essays, especially opinion or discussion essays. Each should be answered in a slightly different way.

    Analysing the question properly is essential to avoiding this error. I’ll also show you how to do this and give you a simple 4 part structure for planning your essay.


    Essay Structure

    Let’s look at this essay structure straight away. You can use it to write any IELTS double question essay. It’s easy to learn and will enable you to quickly plan and write a high-level essay.

    1) Introduction

          •   Paraphrase the question
          •   Outline sentence – state your answer to both questions

    2) Main body paragraph 1 – Answer question 1

          • Topic sentence – state your answer
          • Explanation – develop the idea
          • Example – give an example

    3) Main body paragraph 2 – Answer question 2

          • Topic sentence – state your answer
          • Explanation – develop the idea
          • Example – give an example

    4) Conclusion : Summarize both questions and answers


    This structure will give us a well-balanced essay with 4 paragraphs.

    We now need some ideas to add to the structure and we’ll have everything we need for our essay.


    How To Plan IELTS Double Question Essays

    Here’s the question we’re going to be answering in our model essay followed by the 3 steps of the planning process.

    Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted.

    How can we conserve these resources?

    What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

      • Analyse the question
      • Generate ideas
      • Identify vocabulary

    # 1  Analyse the question

    This is an essential step in the planning process and will ensure that you answer the question fully. It’s quick and easy to do. You just need to identify 3 different types of words:

    • Topic words
    • Other keywords
    • Instruction words

    Topics words are the ones that identify the general subject of the question and will be found in the statement part of the question.

    Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted.

    So, this question is about ‘fossil fuels’.

    Many people will do this first step of the process and then write about the topic in general. This is a serious mistake and leads to low marks for task achievement.

    Now that we know what the general topic is, we need to understand exactly what aspect of fossil fuels we’re being asked to write about.

    The other keywords in the question tell you the specific things you must write about. For IELTS double question essays, these will often be in the instructions, that is, the actual questions.

    Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted.

    How can we conserve these resources?

    What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

    By highlighting these words, it’s easy to identify the topics. Your essay must only include ideas relevant to these ideas.

    The instruction words are the questions themselves. These tell you exactly what type of information is required and each will become the topic for one of the two main body paragraphs.

    How can we conserve these resources?

    What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

    The first body paragraph will answer the first question (How?) and the second body paragraph will answer the second question (What?).

    # 2  Generate ideas

    The next task is to generate some ideas to write about.

    There are several different ways to think up ideas. I cover them fully on the IELTS Essay Planning page.

    We’re going to use the ‘friends technique’. This is the method I prefer as it allows you to take a step back from the stress of the exam situation and think more calmly.

    Here’s how it works. Imagine that you are in a casual conversation with a friend over a cup of coffee and they ask you this question. What are the first thoughts to come into your head? Plan your essay around these ideas.

    Doing this will help you to come up with simple answers in everyday language rather than straining your brain to think of amazing ideas using high-level language, which isn’t necessary.

    You might want to try this yourself before reading on for my ideas.

    Here are my ideas as I thought of them:

    How can we conserve these resources? 

        • Become more energy conscious & more energy efficient
        • Use more renewable energy sources – solar panels
        • All new homes should be built with solar panels on
        • Use car less – walk, cycle, public transport, only travel when really necessary
        • Energy-efficient light bulbs

    What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

        • Solar power
        • Wind power
        • Wave energy
        • Tidal energy
        • Biomass energy
        • Geothermal energy


    Don’t spend long on this as you only need one or two ideas.

    There is so much to write about this topic that we have to be very careful we don’t try to include too many different ideas and just end up with a list for each question rather than a well-developed essay.

    Choose one main idea for each part of the question. My advice on making your selection is to choose ideas that you can quickly think of examples for.

    Here are my choices:

    How can we conserve these resources?

      • Use car less – walk, cycle, public transport

    What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

      • Natural forces – solar & wind power, wave & tidal energy

    We’re almost ready to start writing our IELTS double question essay but first, we have one other small task to do.


    # 3  Vocabulary

    During the planning stage, quickly jot down some vocabulary that comes to mind as you decide which ideas you are going to write about, especially synonyms of key words. This will save you having to stop and think of the right language while you’re writing.

    For the ideas I’ve chosen, useful words will include:

      • sustainable 
      • renewable energy
      • energy-efficient

    With that done, we can focus on the first paragraph of the essay – the introduction.


    How To Write an Introduction

    The best introductions to IELTS double question essays have a simple 2 part structure:

    1)  Paraphrase the question

    2)  Outline sentence – state your answer to both questions

    It should:

      • Have 2-3 sentences
      • Be 40-60 words long
      • Take 5 minutes to write

    1)  Paraphrase the question

    Start your introduction by paraphrasing the statement part of the question.

    Question statement:

    Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted.

    Paraphrased question: 

    The world is currently reliant on oil, coal and natural gas for the majority of its energy requirements but there will come a time when these run out.

    We are simply saying the same thing in a different way and using different vocabulary.


    2)  Outline statement

    Now we need to add an outline statement where we outline the two main points that we’ll cover in the rest of the essay, that is, the answers to the two questions.

    We need to be very specific about what we are going to write about.

    Here’s a reminder of the ideas I’ve chosen to answer the two questions:

    How can we conserve these resources?

      • Use car less – walk, cycle, public transport

    What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

      • Natural forces –solar & wind power, wave & tidal energy

    Outline statement:

    This essay will discuss how we can help to prevent our non-renewable resources from becoming depleted by using our cars less frequently and it will name some natural forces that can be harnessed to generate power.

    Note my use of synonyms to replace key words in the question. You don’t have to replace every key word but do so where possible whilst ensuring that your language sounds natural.

    So, let’s bring the two elements of our introduction together.

        Introduction

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    This introduction achieves three important functions:

      • It shows the examiner that you understand the question.
      • It acts as a guide to the examiner as to what your essay is about.
      • It also helps to keep you focused and on track as you write.

    The two ideas in your introduction will become your two main body paragraphs.

    Main body paragraph 1 – Use car less – walk, cycle, public transport

    Main body paragraph 2 – Renewable energy / natural forces – solar & wind power, wave & tidal energy


    How To Write Main Body Paragraphs

    Main body paragraphs in IELTS double question essays should contain 3 things:

      • Topic sentence – state your answer
      • Explanation – develop the idea
      • Example – give an example

    Main Body Paragraph 1 – Answer question 1

    The topic sentence summarises the main idea of the paragraph. That’s all it needs to do so it doesn’t have to be complicated.

    It plays an important role in ensuring that your ideas flow logically from one to another. It does this by acting as a signpost for what is to come next, that is, what the paragraph will be about.

    If you maintain a clear development of ideas throughout your essay, you will get high marks for task achievement and cohesion and coherence.

    We’ll now take the idea for our first main body paragraph and create our topic sentence.

    Main body paragraph 1 – Use car less – walk, cycle, public transport, only travel when really necessary

     

    Topic sentence:

    Conserving energy is a responsibility of every individual and an important way in which we can all do our bit is to use more energy-efficient means of transport. 

     

    Next, we must write an explanation sentence that develops the idea.

     

    Explanation sentence: 

    The easiest way to do this is to leave the car at home and walk or cycle to our destination if it isn’t too far away, or take public transport for longer journeys. Another way to reduce our fuel consumption is to car share.

    Finally, we add an example to support our main point. If you can’t think of a real example, it’s fine to make one up, as long as it’s believable. The examiner isn’t going to check your facts. Alternative, you could add another piece of information to support your idea but an example is better.

    Example sentence:

    Whenever my friends and I get together for coffee, we agree to meet up at a café that we can each get to without having to drive our cars there. We usually go on foot or ride our bikes. If everyone made small decisions like this, it would make a real difference.

     

    That’s the 3 parts of our first main body paragraph complete. Here’s the finished paragraph.

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    We now follow the same process for our second main body paragraph.


    Main Body Paragraph 2 – Answer question 2

    Again, we’ll now take the idea I’ve chosen for this paragraph and create our topic sentence.

    Main body paragraph 2 – Renewable energy / natural forces – solar & wind power, wave & tidal energy

     

    Topic sentence:

    The most sustainable alternatives to fossil fuels are the generation of power from natural forces such as the sun, wind and oceans.

    Now for the explanation where we expand on this idea.

    Explanation sentence:

    Solar and wind power are already widely used across the world but it is wave power and tidal energy that have the greatest untapped potential to provide for our energy needs in the future.

     

    Finally, an example to support our main point.

    Example sentence:

    A report recently commissioned in the United Kingdom estimates that tidal energy could meet as much as 20% of the UK’s current electricity demands once the technology being developed is operational. Wave energy converters are expected to prove equally successful in the long-term.

    That’s the 3 parts of our second main body paragraph complete. Here’s the finished paragraph.

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    Now we need a conclusion and our IELTS double question essay is done.


    How To Write a Conclusion

    The conclusion is a summary of the main points in your essay and can often be done in a single sentence. It should never introduce new ideas.

    If you’re below the minimum 250 words after you’ve written your conclusion, you can add a prediction or recommendation statement.

    Our essay is already over the minimum word limit so we don’t need this extra sentence but you can learn more about how to write a prediction or recommendation statement for IELTS double question essays on the Task 2 Conclusions page.

    The conclusion is the easiest sentence in the essay to write but one of the most important.

    A good conclusion to an IELTS double question essay will:

      • Neatly end the essay
      • Link all your ideas together
      • Sum up your argument or opinion
      • Answer the question

    If you achieve this, you’ll improve your score for both task achievement and cohesion and coherence which together make up 50% of the overall marks. Without a conclusion, you’ll score below band 6 for task achievement.

    You can start almost any final paragraph of an IELTS double question essay with the words:

      • In conclusion

            or

      • To conclude

    Now all you need to do is briefly summarize the main ideas into one or two sentences.

    Here’s a top tip. Go back and read the introduction to the essay because this is also a summary of the essay. It outlines what you are going to write about.

    To create a great conclusion, you simply have to paraphrase the introduction.

    Introduction:

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    Here is the same information formed into a conclusion:

     

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    That’s it. We’ve completed our essay. Here it is with the 4 paragraphs put together.

     

    Question:

    Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted.

    How can we conserve these resources?

    What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

    Finished IELTS double question essay.

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    (351 words)

    Go through this lesson as many times as you need to in order to fully understand it and put in lots of practice writing IELTS double question essays from past exam questions. Practice is the only way to improve your skills.

  • How to Plan & Write IELTS Advantages and Disadvantages Essays

    Questions for IELTS advantages and disadvantages essays can be worded in several different ways. Here is some typical wording that might be used:

    • What are the advantages and disadvantages of….?
    • Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
    • Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

    It is also common for synonyms of ‘advantages’ and ‘disadvantages’ to be used, such as ‘benefits’ and ‘drawbacks’, as can be seen in this sample question.

    A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.

    What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

    I’ll be using this question to guide you through the process of planning and writing an IELTS advantage and disadvantages essay later on in this lesson.

    Here’s what the lesson covers:

    Click the links to see lessons on each of these Task 2 essay writing topics.

    Once you understand the process, practice on past questions. Take your time at first and gradually speed up until you can plan and write an essay of at least 250 words in the 40 minutes allowed in the exam.

    The Question

    IELTS advantages and disadvantages essay questions fall into two main categories:

    • Questions that ask for your opinion.
    • Questions that do not require you to state your opinion.

    The first part of the question will always be a statement. You will then be asked to write about both the advantages and disadvantages of the idea stated. You may also be required to state your opinion.

    Here are two more sample questions for illustration. For the first one, you must give your opinion but in the second, you should not.

    1. Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies.

    Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

    2. Most career choices demand vocational skills or specialist knowledge. However, despite this, most schools still teach academic subjects such as history or social studies.

    Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this?

    Essay Structures

    Now let’s look at two simple structures you can use to write IELTS advantages and disadvantages essays. They’re not the only possible structures but are ones I recommend because they are easy to learn and will enable you to quickly plan and write a high-level essay.

    I’ll explain later why I’m giving you two slightly different structures.

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    These structures will give you a well-balanced essay with 4 paragraphs.

    One Advantage and Disadvantage or Two?

    The question will state ‘advantages’ and ‘disadvantages’ in the plural, that is, more than one. However, it is acceptable to write about just one.

    This should give you an essay of just over the minimum 250 words. To write about two advantages and disadvantages will require you to write nearer 400 words which are a lot to plan and write in the 40 minutes allowed.

    It is better to fully develop one advantage and one disadvantage than ending up with your second idea missing an explanation or an example because you run out of time, but you can write about two if you feel able to or more comfortable doing so.

    Having said that, using essay structure 2, where you start with the examples, will enable you to easily add more than one advantage and disadvantage without having to write many more words.

    It will be more suitable for some questions than others so bear this in mind when you’re writing practice essays and try out both structures.

    I’m going to use essay structure 2 to show you step-by-step how to write an IELTS advantage and disadvantages essay. I’ll also give you a model answer using essay structure 1 so that you can compare the two.


     

    How To Plan
    IELTS Advantages and Disadvantages Essays

    The planning process only takes around 5 minutes but it is essential as it will save you time overall and will result in a far better essay and thus, higher marks. There are the 3 things you need to do:

      • Analyse the question
      • Generate ideas
      • Identify vocabulary

    # 1  Analyse the question

    Analysing the question will ensure that you answer it fully. It’s quick and easy to do. You just need to identify 3 different types of words:

      • Topic words
      • Other keywords
      • Instruction words

     

    Topics words are the ones that identify the general subject of the question and will be found in the statement part of the question.

    Here is the question we’re going to be working on. I’ve highlighted the topic words in blue.

    A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.

    So, this question is about ‘tourism’.

    Many people do this first step of the process and then write about the topic in general. This is a serious mistake and leads to low marks for task achievement.

    What we need to do now that we know the general topic, is to understand exactly what aspect of tourism we’re being asked to write about.

    The other keywords in the question tell you the specific topic your essay must be about.

    A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.

    What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

     

    By highlighting these words, it’s easy to see that you are being asked to write about the conflicting issues of tourism being ‘a main source of income’ in many places, yet also being ‘a source of problems’.

    Your essay must only include ideas relevant to this aspect of tourism.

    The instruction words are the question itself. They tell you exactly what to include in your essay.

    A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.

    What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

    Here, we are required to write about:

      • The advantages of tourism in relation to income generation.
      • The disadvantage of tourism in relation to problems it can cause.
      • Our opinion as to whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

    Note the use of the synonyms ‘benefits’ and ‘drawback’ in the second sentence of the question.



    # 2  Generate ideas

    The next task is to generate some ideas to write about.

    There are several different ways to think up ideas. I cover them fully on the IELTS Essay Planning page.

    I’m going to demonstrate two of them for you here – the ‘friends technique’, which is suitable for most IELTS essays, and the ‘example method’, which perfectly fits essay structure 2.

    The ‘friends technique’ is the method I generally prefer as it allows you to take a step back from the stress of the exam situation and think more calmly.

    Here’s how it works. Imagine that you are chatting with a friend over a cup of coffee and they ask you this question. What are the first thoughts to come into your head? Plan your essay around these ideas.

    Doing this will help you to come up with simple answers in everyday language rather than straining your brain to think of amazing ideas using high-level language, which isn’t necessary.

    Here are my ideas using the friends technique:

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    There are far too many ideas here to include in an essay of just over 250 words. Think up a few then pick one advantage and one disadvantage that you think you can develop well.

    With the ‘example method‘, on the other hand, you start by thinking of specific examples related to the question. They can come from your own experience or be something you’ve read or heard about. These examples will generate ideas that will become the main points of your essay.

    It works particularly well for the model question I’ve selected for this lesson which is why I’ve included the second essay structure.

    Here are my ideas using the examples technique:

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    Now that we have some ideas, we’re almost ready to start writing our IELTS advantages and disadvantages essay, but first, we have one more task to do.


    # 3  Vocabulary

    During the planning stage, quickly jot down some vocabulary that comes to mind as you decide what you’re going to write about, especially synonyms of key words. This will save you having to stop and think of the right language while you’re writing.


    Writing an IELTS Advantages and Disadvantages Essay

    We’re ready to begin writing our essay. For the first model answer, I’m going to take you step-by-step through essay structure 2. I’ll then give you a model answer for essay structure 1.

    Here’s a reminder of the question and the essay structure.

    A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.

    What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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    We’ll now start work on the introduction.


    How To Write an Introduction

    The introduction to an IELTS advantages and disadvantages essay should have a simple 2 or 3 part structure:

      • Paraphrase the question
      • Outline the main ideas
      • State your opinion (if required)

    Our tourism question asks for our opinion so our introduction will have 3 parts.

    1)  Paraphrase the question

    Start your introduction by paraphrasing the question statement.

    Paraphrased question: 

    Although holidaymakers contribute hugely to the economies of many popular destinations, the influx of tourists can also cause serious issues.

     

    Note my use of synonyms for some of the key words. It’s fine to repeat one or two words if you can’t think of suitable synonyms. Above all, your language must sound natural.



    2)  Outline statement

    Now we need to add a statement where we outline the main points that we’ll be covering in the rest of the essay, that is, an advantage of tourism and a disadvantage of tourism.

    Here are the two main ideas I’ve chosen to write about:

      • Advantage – Poor areas are now prosperous tourist resorts
      • Disadvantage – Displacement of local people

    Outline statement: 

    This essay will demonstrate how tourism can transform the economy of poor areas but will also show that this can lead to such problems as the displacement of local people.



    3)  Opinion statement

     

    The question also asks for our opinion and it’s essential that we include it in the introduction.

    Opinion statement:

    Whilst acknowledging that there are drawbacks, the essay will argue that the advantages of the tourist industry outweigh the disadvantages.

    So, let’s bring the three elements of our introduction together.

       Introduction

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    This introduction achieves three important functions:

      • It shows the examiner that you understand the question.
      • It acts as a guide to the examiner as to what your essay is about.
      • It also helps to keep you focused and on track as you write.

    The two ideas in your introduction will become your two main body paragraphs.

    Main body paragraph 1 – Poor areas are now prosperous tourist resorts

    Main body paragraph 2 – Displacement of local people

     


    How To Write Main Body Paragraphs

    Main body paragraphs in IELTS advantages and disadvantages essays written using structure 2, should contain 3 things:

      • Topic sentence – give an example
      • Explanation – explain the benefits/advantages
      • Consequence – state the result

    Main Body Paragraph 1

    The topic sentence summarizes the main idea of the paragraph. It plays an important role in ensuring that your ideas flow logically from one to another. It does this by acting as a signpost for what is to come next, that is, what the paragraph will be about.

    If you maintain a clear development of ideas throughout your essay, you will get high marks for task achievement and cohesion and coherence.

    In this instance, the topic sentence will introduce our first example, for which I’ve chosen Thailand.

      • Main idea  Poor areas are now prosperous tourist resorts
      • Example – Thailand

    Topic sentence:

    One country that has experienced a significant economic boost from tourism is Thailand.

    Next, we must write an explanation sentence that states the main point of our example.

    Explanation sentence: 

    Over the past 50 years, many of its small fishing villages, where people often struggled to make a living, have been developed into thriving holiday destinations.

    Finally, we explain the consequence or result of the situation. This is where we give an example of one specific advantage. It is better to pick one and develop it than to just add a long list.

    Consequence:

    With all the hotels, restaurants, shops and other tourist facilities that have been developed, there are now enough jobs for everyone and the general standard of living has greatly increased.  Many local people have spotted new business opportunities and become entrepreneurs which has further diversified the economy.

    That’s the 3 parts of our first main body paragraph complete. Here’s the finished paragraph.

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    We’ll now follow the same process for our second main body paragraph.


    Main Body Paragraph 2

    Main idea Displacement of local people
    Example – Venice

     

    First, we write the topic sentence to summarise the main idea.

    Topic sentence:

    In Venice, on the other hand, the huge popularity of the beautiful canals and stunning architecture with visitors from around the world has had a negative impact on local residents.

    Now for the explanation sentence that states the main point of our example.

    Explanation sentence:

    The growing need for tourist accommodation, places to eat and shops has forced many people from their homes to make way for this new development.

    Finally, a specific example to explain the consequence.

    Consequence:

    Not only have these people suffered by having to move away from their family and friends but the situation has also resulted in a lost sense of community in the worst affected areas.

    That’s the 3 parts of our second main body paragraph complete. Here’s the finished paragraph.

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    Now we need a conclusion and our IELTS advantages and disadvantages essay is done.


    How To Write a Conclusion

     

    The conclusion is a summary of the main points in your essay and can generally be done in a single sentence. It should never introduce new ideas.

    If you’re below the minimum 250 words after you’ve written your conclusion, you can add a prediction or recommendation statement.

    Our essay is already near the minimum word limit so we don’t need this extra sentence but you can learn more about how to write a prediction or recommendation statement for IELTS advantages and disadvantages essays on the Task 2 Conclusions page.

    The conclusion is the easiest sentence in the essay to write but one of the most important.

    A good conclusion will:

      • Neatly end the essay
      • Link all your ideas together
      • Sum up your argument or opinion
      • Answer the question

     

    If you achieve this, you’ll improve your score for both task achievement and cohesion and coherence which together make up 50% of the overall marks. Without a conclusion, you’ll score below band 6 for task achievement.

    You can start almost any final paragraph of an IELTS advantages and disadvantages essay with the words:

      • In conclusion

            or

      • To conclude

    Now all you need to do is briefly summarise the main ideas into one sentence.

    Here’s a top tip. Go back and read the introduction to the essay because this is also a summary of the essay. It outlines what you are going to write about.

    To create a great conclusion, you simply have to paraphrase the introduction.

    Introduction:

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    Here’s the same information formed into a conclusion:

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    That’s it. We’ve completed our advantages and disadvantages essay. Here it is with the 4 paragraphs put together.

    Question:

    A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.

    What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

    Finished IELTS advantages and disadvantages essay.

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    Go through this lesson as many times as you need to in order to fully understand it and put in lots of practice writing IELTS advantages and disadvantages essays from past exam questions. Practice is the only way to improve your skills.


    Example IELTS Advantages and Disadvantages Essay
    for Structure 1

     

    Now, here’s a model answer for essay structure 1. First, a reminder of the structure and the ideas I generated using the friends technique.

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    Ideas generation – Friends technique

    I’ve underline the ideas I’ve chosen to write about in this second essay:

    Advantages of tourism – source of income:

    • Provides jobs for local people
    • Opportunities for local entrepreneurs
    • Tourist spending boosts both national & local economy
    • Brings improvement in local infrastructure & facilities which benefit whole community
    • Helps maintain traditions & culture

    Disadvantages of tourism – the problems:

    • Money goes to wealthy business owners not local people
    • Increased crime
    • Illegal activities, e.g. drugs
    • More pubs & clubs – changes the local culture
    • Increase in property values
    • Destruction of the natural environment to build hotels, airports & other facilities
    • Displacement of indigenous people

    The essay

    See if you can identify the different parts of the essay and how I have developed them.

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    That’s it. Now it’s time for you to get practicing.

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